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Officer Training / The Classroom
January 24, 2007, 07:47:36 PM
No no, that will do. =P Excellent penmanship. Certaintly an experienced writer. That is what we are looking for in a member unfortunately they come rarely. =P Now since you do not need any tips on posting we do not need to go any farther that. But you will be given another situation were you will be posting with another person. I will be that other person okay? We will continue from were you left off. Oh and nothing against your form of posting so don't take this the wrong way. In Expansion Fleet many members often post in a format that seperates their thoughts and actions from their actual speech. I will give you an example when I add my post below.
*...Lt. Hamilton and his platoon were pinned down in the corridor. They were making their way to the barracks to regroup with Lt. Kang's platoon to then head out to the HQ but as they showed up and explosion cause the corridor to collapse and sever his platoon from Kang. They didn't have much time to try and move the rubble. A couple squads of Jem'Hadar started to open up on them...*
"Now how are we going to regroup when we have all these damn Jem'Hadar sneaking up on us all the damn time." Alex thought to himself.
"O.K. lets get rid of these damn Jemmies and seal that door so we can get this mess cleared up to regroup with Lt. Kang and his men.!"
*... The men shout as the reply to the order and the platoon charges to take up key position to battle the Jemmies, a nick name given to them by Lt. Hamiltons company. They lay down a suppressive fire to prevent their advance then a couple men through photon grenades to kill off a few of the Jem'Hadar that were closer to the Platoon. Hamilton hears from behind the rubble blocking Kang's and his platoon what sound like a hand held phaser being detonated. Soon the firing stops and the corridor blast doors are sealed...*
=/\=Hamilton to Kang=/\= (This is how we show we are talking to someone over communicator.)
"Kang do you copy? Over."
*...Lt. Hamilton and his platoon were pinned down in the corridor. They were making their way to the barracks to regroup with Lt. Kang's platoon to then head out to the HQ but as they showed up and explosion cause the corridor to collapse and sever his platoon from Kang. They didn't have much time to try and move the rubble. A couple squads of Jem'Hadar started to open up on them...*
"Now how are we going to regroup when we have all these damn Jem'Hadar sneaking up on us all the damn time." Alex thought to himself.
"O.K. lets get rid of these damn Jemmies and seal that door so we can get this mess cleared up to regroup with Lt. Kang and his men.!"
*... The men shout as the reply to the order and the platoon charges to take up key position to battle the Jemmies, a nick name given to them by Lt. Hamiltons company. They lay down a suppressive fire to prevent their advance then a couple men through photon grenades to kill off a few of the Jem'Hadar that were closer to the Platoon. Hamilton hears from behind the rubble blocking Kang's and his platoon what sound like a hand held phaser being detonated. Soon the firing stops and the corridor blast doors are sealed...*
=/\=Hamilton to Kang=/\= (This is how we show we are talking to someone over communicator.)
"Kang do you copy? Over."
#4
Officer Training / The Classroom
January 24, 2007, 12:15:45 AM
I see. You seem to have the experience and Officer would require now lets check your posting.
This is the situation.
You are asleep in your bunk when all of the sudden the base is attacked. You are knocked out of your bunk and the klaxons go off. Marine forces are mobilizing to repel. The corridor your running down is suddenly engulfed in an explosion and you are cut off from your platoon and alls you have on you is your hand held phaser and your traditional klingon knife. Your main priority is to regroup with your platoon and report to the front.
Your invaders will be lets say Jem'Hadar.
=P have fun posting.
This is the situation.
You are asleep in your bunk when all of the sudden the base is attacked. You are knocked out of your bunk and the klaxons go off. Marine forces are mobilizing to repel. The corridor your running down is suddenly engulfed in an explosion and you are cut off from your platoon and alls you have on you is your hand held phaser and your traditional klingon knife. Your main priority is to regroup with your platoon and report to the front.
Your invaders will be lets say Jem'Hadar.
=P have fun posting.
#5
Officer Training / The Classroom
January 23, 2007, 07:03:39 PM
Welcome cadet. Now before we get on to your marine training I want to know a little about you. Tell me about your past RPG experiences.
#6
Officer Training / The Classroom
January 22, 2007, 11:23:03 AM
All Cadets report in here to begin your marine officer training course.
#9
Officer Training / Reporting In
January 22, 2007, 02:07:29 AM
Defiantly is. =P We will start your training on the 22nd just to wait and see if anyone else will report in.
#10
Officer Training / Reporting In
January 19, 2007, 08:39:47 PM
Welcome, I'm sorry for the long wait. Are you going in for a certain position? Or one that is currently open. You can go the the marine Command center to look and see whats open. If there is a position that you want that is not listed and reasonable let me know =P
#11
Starfleet Academy / Dantor Base Academy
January 19, 2007, 08:25:33 PM
Both of you can report to the Marine Contingent Boot Camp to commence your training. =P Sorry for being Late.
#12
Admiral's Welcome Desk / GENERAL ASSIGNMENTS - REPORT FOR DUTY HERE IF...
January 19, 2007, 08:22:02 PM
I do beg your forgiveness for my immense tardiness. If you are still up for becoming a marine I will be in the Boot Camp on Dantor in the Marine Contingent.
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